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The Average God - Prelude
God Is In This Town


Hello Mr. Kokroach.

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LaughtonMcCry Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student General Artist
thets a wonderfull story.
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izitmee Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
Thanks a lot :) Hope to finish my current other project soon and get back to it.
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The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's... er... yes. That's um... unexpected. I guess that's what we call "throwing a curveball". Fantastic. Those kind of narrative ruptures are what you do best.
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izitmee Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
Thanks Julien :) I'm glad the curveball worked. I started this comic very casually, and during the second page I realized where I wanted to go, and everything kind of changed.
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cluedog Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Holy nuts...wait, maybe I shouldn't have said that. Mr. Kokroach is a robot!?
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izitmee Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Ahaha, you shouldn't have mentioned holy nuts, especially with what happens in the next page :D
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Denim-Trousers Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
Tooootally didn't see that coming!
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izitmee Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Glad about that :boogie:
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joeyv7 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
Sweet undersea window, and I wonder what's up with the little girl :hmm:
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izitmee Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
Thanks Cathy :) A little more about the little girl is coming in page 5 :iconsecretplz:
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DiegoTripodi Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
(1-3) Great start, man! Right from the last panel of page 1 it made me curious to check the rest. I like how you managed to balance the pages with so many panels in them, and still make them look great as a whole. Are you hand-lettering these? The font works great with the linework, so I suppose so... looking forward to seeing how things develop! :D
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izitmee Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
Yey, thanks Diego :aww: I'm hand-lettering (apart some old comic I translated from Italian I always hand-letter: I prefer it a lot :nerd:), but am not very satisfied of it cause I'm using a crappy pen this time. Though reading your appreciation of the fonts just made me happy and a little reconsidering :D
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DiegoTripodi Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
:laughing: It does make a difference-- I haven't hand-lettered my comics because of not liking my letters very much, and being lazy to work them up until I like them enough, but there's no comparision, I think, when someone takes the effort to hand-letter their pages instead of having someone else doing so, or using a computer font... what pen do you use for the letters, Daniele?
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izitmee Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
As of now I'm using a crappy Serbian 0.5 ink pen. But usually I use either a Pilot V5 Hi-Tecpoint (uses liquid ink, and is good for more edgy lettering - and is also great for drawing), or a 0.4 Staedtler Pigment Liner (good for smoother lettering). When doing digital stuff instead, I use the main brush with a size of 12 or 15, and a hard pressure sensitivity :nerd:
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DiegoTripodi Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011
Well the results look great!-- I didn't think you were using pens like those (I though it probably was some type of crow quill that you were using). In my experience using that type of pens, I usually get these stiff, lifeless lines-- though of course it's the hand and not the tool. Do you hand-write the texts when working all-digital as well...? Pheew...! I've had a tablet for the last 3 years, but I only use it for coloring lineworks that I scanned-- adjusting the pressure of the pen is already beyond my knowledge there. :laughing: What I sometimes like though, it's working all digital when making roughs-- I haven't been able to get results that I like very much, but it's very fun doing so. :)
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izitmee Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
I actually came here to dA some 4 months ago (after ignoring it for almost 2 years :XD:) because I wanted to learn to paint digitally, and this looked like a cool inspirational place. I eventually got back to my love for comics, but while I was going digital and learning from tutorials and such, I was astounded at the quality of some people's roughs, and by the short amount of time they used to make them :faint:
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DiegoTripodi Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
True, true-- that's precisely what I like best about digital artworks. The very detailed ones, I don't really have much of an interest in, but I really like when someone can make something cool with some lines and stains used in nice ways. :)
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DanNauenburg Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
...And now with the robot, it's getting weird.
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izitmee Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
And yet more weirdness to come :nerd: :D
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ElectricGecko Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
Mr. Kokroach is a robot? And has some connection to naked Jesus? Hmm. I'll have to see where this goes...
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izitmee Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
I've completed page 6 yesterday, and I'm like halfway through the premise of the story, so it looks long, and going to more weirdness...
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